From c7dfd8dc13e07b91e40a1dfd17801e8dd5939378 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Wenjie Teo <wjteo1990@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 23 Apr 2024 22:13:02 +0700
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] update array match update

direct matching of documents in an array actually works, so we need to re-word the messaging in this document
---
 .../2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx     | 29 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx b/docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx
index 8e23ac5..b4b2ea6 100644
--- a/docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx
+++ b/docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx
@@ -31,19 +31,7 @@ attributes: [
   ],
 ```
 
-How do we search for all the books that have an msrp of 9.99? We want books that, inside `attributes` has an object with key `msrp` and value `9.99`. We can think this works:
-
-```js
-let nineNinetyNine = {$match: {"attributes.key": "msrp", "attributes.value": 9.99}};
-let showOnlyTheseFields = {$project: {_id: 0, title: 1, year: 1, totalInventory: 1, available: 1, "attributes": 1}};
-
-db.books.aggregate([
-    nineNinetyNine,
-    showOnlyTheseFields,
-]);
-```
-
-But it doesn't. This one works:
+How do we search for all the books that have an msrp of 9.99? We want books that, inside `attributes` has an object with key `msrp` and value `9.99`. We can get it to work with this:
 
 ```js
 db.books.aggregate([
@@ -63,5 +51,18 @@ db.books.aggregate([
   { $unwind : "$attributes" },
 ]);
 ```
+You should get one document per attribute of the original book.
+
+But you can actually match documents in an array in a much more straightforward way:
+
+```js
+let nineNinetyNine = {$match: {"attributes.key": "msrp", "attributes.value": 9.99}};
+let showOnlyTheseFields = {$project: {_id: 0, title: 1, year: 1, totalInventory: 1, available: 1, "attributes": 1}};
+
+db.books.aggregate([
+    nineNinetyNine,
+    showOnlyTheseFields,
+]);
+```
+
 
-You should get one document per attribute of the original book.
\ No newline at end of file

From 953f4cde3d51221a2d2298ea20f1cb7e13988ee0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Wenjie Teo <wjteo1990@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 23 Apr 2024 22:20:47 +0700
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update 2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx

---
 docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx b/docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx
index b4b2ea6..b49052a 100644
--- a/docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx
+++ b/docs/40-using-arrays/2-search-inside-objects-in-arrays.mdx
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ db.books.aggregate([
 ```
 You should get one document per attribute of the original book.
 
-But you can actually match documents in an array in a much more straightforward way:
+But you can actually match documents in an array in a more straightforward fashion:
 
 ```js
 let nineNinetyNine = {$match: {"attributes.key": "msrp", "attributes.value": 9.99}};