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-Despite the information for some repositories being loaded rather quickly, the user only sees the resulting list after all of
-the data has been loaded. Until then, the loader icon runs showing the progress, but there's no information about the current
-state or what contributors are already loaded.
+Despite the information for some repositories being loaded quite quickly, the user only sees the resulting list after all 
+the data has been loaded. Until then, the loader icon progresses, showing no information about the current
+state or which contributors have already been loaded.
 
-You can show the intermediate results earlier and display all of the contributors after loading the data for each of the
-repositories:
+You can present the intermediate results sooner and display all of the contributors after loading the data for each 
+repository:
 
 ![Loading data](images/loading.gif)
 
 To implement this functionality, in the [src/tasks/Request6Progress.kt](course://Coroutines/Showing progress/src/tasks/Request6Progress.kt), you'll need to pass the logic updating the UI
-as a callback, so that it's called on each intermediate state:
+as a callback, so that it's called at each intermediate state:
 
 ```kotlin
 suspend fun loadContributorsProgress(
@@ -36,18 +36,18 @@ launch(Dispatchers.Default) {
 
 * The `updateResults()` parameter is declared as `suspend` in `loadContributorsProgress()`. It's necessary to call
   `withContext`, which is a `suspend` function inside the corresponding lambda argument.
-* `updateResults()` callback takes an additional Boolean parameter as an argument specifying whether the loading has
+* The `updateResults()` callback takes an additional Boolean parameter as an argument, specifying whether the loading has
   completed and the results are final.
 
 ## Task
 
-In the [src/tasks/Request6Progress.kt](course://Coroutines/Showing progress/src/tasks/Request6Progress.kt) file, implement the `loadContributorsProgress()` function that shows the intermediate
-progress. Base it on the `loadContributorsSuspend()` function from [src/tasks/Request4Suspend.kt](course://Coroutines/Showing progress/src/tasks/Request4Suspend.kt).
+In the [src/tasks/Request6Progress.kt](course://Coroutines/Showing progress/src/tasks/Request6Progress.kt) file, implement the `loadContributorsProgress()` function, which displays the intermediate
+progress. This should be based on the `loadContributorsSuspend()` function from [src/tasks/Request4Suspend.kt](course://Coroutines/Showing progress/src/tasks/Request4Suspend.kt).
 
 * Use a simple version without concurrency; you'll add it later in the next section.
 * The intermediate list of contributors should be shown in an "aggregated" state, not just the list of users loaded for
   each repository.
-* The total number of contributions for each user should be increased when the data for each new
+* The total number of contributions for each user should increment every time data for a new
   repository is loaded.
 
-For a more detailed description, you can look at [this article](https://kotlinlang.org/docs/coroutines-and-channels.html#showing-progress)
+For a more detailed description, you can refer to [this article](https://kotlinlang.org/docs/coroutines-and-channels.html#showing-progress)