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specifications/xslt-40/src/function-catalog.xml

@@ -1218,16 +1218,17 @@
          <olist>
             <item><p>If both <var>K1</var> and <var>K2</var> are of type 
                <code>xs:string</code>, <code>xs:untypedAtomic</code>,
-            or <code>xs:anyURI</code>, then <code>compare(<var>K1</var>, <var>K2</var>, $collation)</code>
+            or <code>xs:anyURI</code>, then they are deemed equal if 
+               <code>compare(<var>K1</var>, <var>K2</var>, $collation)</code>
             returns zero, where <code>$collation</code> is the collation of the key definition.</p></item>
-            <item><p>Otherwise, <code>atomic-equal(<var>K1</var>, <var>K2</var>)</code>
+            <item><p>Otherwise, they are deemed equal if <code>atomic-equal(<var>K1</var>, <var>K2</var>)</code>
             returns true.</p></item>
          </olist>
 
-         <p>When the <code>composite</code> option is <code>true</code>, then two sequences of atomic
+         <p>When <code>composite="yes"</code>, then two sequences of atomic
             items <var>S1</var> and <var>S2</var> are deemed equal if <code>deep-equal(<var>S1</var>,
-            <var>S2</var>, {'items-equal': $F})) returns true, where <code>$F</code> is the function
-            just described for comparing atomic items.</code></p>
+            <var>S2</var>, {'items-equal': $F}))</code> returns true, where <code>$F</code> is the function
+            just described for comparing atomic items.</p>
 
          <note>
             <p>The rules for comparing items have changed in this version of the specification,
@@ -1315,8 +1316,7 @@
          <p>
             <error spec="XT" type="dynamic" class="DE" code="1260">
                <p>It is a <termref def="dt-dynamic-error"> dynamic error</termref> if the value
-                     <error.extra>of the first argument to the <function>key</function>
-                     function</error.extra> is not a valid QName, or if there is no namespace
+                     of <code>$key-name</code> is not a valid QName, or if there is no namespace
                   declaration in scope for the prefix of the QName, or if the name obtained by
                   expanding the QName is not the same as the expanded name of any
                      <elcode>xsl:key</elcode> declaration in the containing <termref def="dt-package">package</termref>. If the
@@ -1445,7 +1445,7 @@
 
       </fos:examples>
       <fos:changes>
-         <fos:change issue="1619">
+         <fos:change issue="1619" PR="1622" date="2024-11-29">
             <p>The rules for equality comparison have changed to bring keys into line with maps.</p>
          </fos:change>
       </fos:changes>
@@ -1549,7 +1549,7 @@
             </fos:example>
       </fos:examples>
       <fos:changes>
-         <fos:change issue="1619">
+         <fos:change issue="1619" PR="1622" date="2024-11-29">
             <p>New in 4.0.</p>
          </fos:change>
       </fos:changes>