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[Win32Service] Update the security consideration with the 1.1.0 feature #3871

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@macintoshplus macintoshplus commented Oct 15, 2024

The Win32Service version 1.1 improves the service's rights management. This PR updated the security consideration section to add the new feature from version 1.1.

Must be merged after php/doc-base#164

Replace #3551

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This is basically okay, but we want to avoid personalization in the documentation. Please rewrite at least the new paragraph by using passive voice.

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This is basically okay, but we want to avoid personalization in the documentation. Please rewrite at least the new paragraph by using passive voice.

I have rewrite the paragraph.

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Removing some personalization

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Thank you @Girgias . I have forget some sentences. Sorry.

Co-authored-by: Gina Peter Banyard <girgias@php.net>
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cmb69 commented Oct 16, 2024

I have forget some sentences. Sorry.

No problem! It's nice to see that an extension maintainer also cares about the documentation. :)

@cmb69 cmb69 merged commit b655c9d into php:master Oct 16, 2024
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